Re: Ficlet Contest: Beatdown
Posted: Sat Apr 04, 2009 9:16 pm
The whip crack through the cold air brought another ragged shout. Wrists flexed in their bindings out of reflex, the rest of the body hanging from them against the crossed wooden posts.
"Why do you persist?"
The whip cracked again, and another pained shout. Blood trickled.
"Your strength has no value here."
Jol screamed out again as whip peeled flesh. Wind picked up, blowing ice shards into his exposed flesh and sending a wracking shiver down his back - making the pain worse. The red that hit the snow was eerily complimentary to the pennants flapping in the cold Northern wind.
"N-n-nae..." he pleaded, though it came out in no more than a whisper.
"What was that, paladin?" the voice asked, the whip pausing in mid air.
"N-nae moah, please," he said, cracking.
"This?" The whip was held up before his sweat-soaked face, right in front of both eyes so that the question was unmistaken.
"Y-y-ea..." he tried, weakly.
"As you wish." Leather rasped against cloth and chain, and when it settled there was the sound of steel rasping against leather. "It would be more appropriate, this way. The Light reckons that a deed must be punished accordingly, yes?" The grim, balding man that crouched before him yanked Jol's face up to meet his gaze.
"Ah...ah ne'er--"
"You broke your oaths," the man in scarlet spat, pure hatred in his eyes. "Because of men like you, our land is lost. We will reclaim it. But debts must be paid, yes? Balances maintained."
Jol's bedraggled, unshaven chin sagged in the man's grip. His eyes were locked on the blade as the point was rested against his cheek with little pressure.
"An eye...for an eye."
Jol's eyes widened until nearly no more color could be seen in them. "We wurr...undah...ordahs...!"
The balding man before him made a soothing sound, though the effect was lost when combined with his vicious eyes. "Of course you were. From the Damned Prince. Not the Light. The Light will wash away your sin, paladin. But not before your debt is paid...in full."
Jol screamed hysterically before the blade began cutting into his flesh.
"Why do you persist?"
The whip cracked again, and another pained shout. Blood trickled.
"Your strength has no value here."
Jol screamed out again as whip peeled flesh. Wind picked up, blowing ice shards into his exposed flesh and sending a wracking shiver down his back - making the pain worse. The red that hit the snow was eerily complimentary to the pennants flapping in the cold Northern wind.
"N-n-nae..." he pleaded, though it came out in no more than a whisper.
"What was that, paladin?" the voice asked, the whip pausing in mid air.
"N-nae moah, please," he said, cracking.
"This?" The whip was held up before his sweat-soaked face, right in front of both eyes so that the question was unmistaken.
"Y-y-ea..." he tried, weakly.
"As you wish." Leather rasped against cloth and chain, and when it settled there was the sound of steel rasping against leather. "It would be more appropriate, this way. The Light reckons that a deed must be punished accordingly, yes?" The grim, balding man that crouched before him yanked Jol's face up to meet his gaze.
"Ah...ah ne'er--"
"You broke your oaths," the man in scarlet spat, pure hatred in his eyes. "Because of men like you, our land is lost. We will reclaim it. But debts must be paid, yes? Balances maintained."
Jol's bedraggled, unshaven chin sagged in the man's grip. His eyes were locked on the blade as the point was rested against his cheek with little pressure.
"An eye...for an eye."
Jol's eyes widened until nearly no more color could be seen in them. "We wurr...undah...ordahs...!"
The balding man before him made a soothing sound, though the effect was lost when combined with his vicious eyes. "Of course you were. From the Damned Prince. Not the Light. The Light will wash away your sin, paladin. But not before your debt is paid...in full."
Jol screamed hysterically before the blade began cutting into his flesh.